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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-09-09 07:16 PM




Such a loss incomprehensible
Feelings simply like no other
Husbands, wives and children
Maybe a sister or a brother

They are never to be forgotten
Those events of that terrible day
The dust took so long to settle
The sun struggled to shine a ray

Blank faces walked the streets
So was the depth of their despair
Their lives plunged into darkness
So thick with smoke was the air

Many souls cried out helplessly
But so many were never heard
Mass confusion and hysteria
Most unable to speak a word

The events of September 11
Are etched firmly in our minds
A day of disbelief for many
A holocaust for all mankind

Each day we all now savour
Our world will never be the same
This was not some Hollywood movie
Or a fictitious computer game

We will never fully recover
From the images that we saw
Now we all must stand united
As our countries go to war

I reach out my hand of friendship
As we close our eyes and pray
And remember those who perished
On that dark September day





I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (09-09-2002 07:39 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-09 07:28 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, we are all so blessed to have you and so many others reach out to America from around the world, as we all share these tears together, as well as the hope and colors of freedom and love! (big hugggssssss) You are a true angel, sweet friend, your love and compassion is golden, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(God Bless America)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2002-09-09 07:31 PM


Sue...Your sweet words bring tears to my eyes.I very touching poem. Thanks for sharing with us...Paul
Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-09-09 07:32 PM


Things will never be the same...
Very well said, Sue...
~ hugs and sadness

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-09-09 07:49 PM


GOD BLESS AMERICA!




NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2002-09-09 08:58 PM


This is very emotional and brought a flood of tears. Why did this day have to happen?  

Marti

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6 posted 2002-09-09 11:12 PM


Sue:  Beautiful, caring poem and thanks for posting it.  The memories are as painful today as the real event was a year ago.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-09-09 11:13 PM


This is a very loving poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2002-09-10 03:06 AM


Tears are rolling down my face.

This was not some Hollywood movie
Or a fictitious computer game


how I wish it was
Thanks for sharing Sue.

Maree

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9 posted 2002-09-10 06:13 AM


Beautiful and heartfelt Sue, and the graphics are awesome!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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10 posted 2002-09-10 11:13 AM


Sue - thanks for the touching thoughts and the very lovely poignant poem - Paul
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