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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-09-09 09:50 AM

Softly evening falls
     color     hues of pink
and lavender,   outline
where water  and   horizon gather

          paradise

gently whispers   for us

~~~~~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-09-09 09:54 AM

Your work always gently whispers to me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-09 09:55 AM

Fantastic! "where water and horizon gather"

I absolutely love that line! the whole poem, too. Exquisite, truly!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-09 09:57 AM

A very lovely, and calming piece of p-o-e-t-r-y...

Earth Angel

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-09-09 10:19 AM

I can hear it....calling......whispering its peace.......
beautiful Lauren.....

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

5 posted 2002-09-09 10:33 AM

I can think of no other way that you would describe paradise, but in a whisper.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-09 11:04 AM

(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, this is shorter than your usual style but as always your gorgeous words and lovely art with them grace these pages! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, this is a paradise I dream so much of too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-09-09 11:07 AM

Lauren,
A write of delight, enjoyed.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-09-09 11:16 AM

Lauren, lovely, soft thoughts. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

JAR
Junior Member

since 2001-11-06

Posts 34

9 posted 2002-09-09 07:51 PM

LittleL'

whisper soft
you do that
J'

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-09-09 08:01 PM

...such a beautiful whisper...

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