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missing you |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sometimes missing you is still the best part of my day |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! what a profound thought is so few words. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Yeh I understand you its really the best part of our life ,,, I am tired of missing someone and I really miss him alot... Lovely writes. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
too true, said alot in a few words here, |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
... You don't know the significance of three dots...basically they mean there are no words to be said. Oh yes...now, this poem I get. Good stuff D  K |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
(sometimes its the only part of the day)  (have I mentioned how good heart on sleeve looks on you?)  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling....in gentle understand... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dunc, Good one enjoyed. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ahhh, this is so sweet.  You can never win or lose |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kethry's reply is ditto for me! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
... *Shaking my head in utter amazement at your talent* ~Hugs YOU!~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan, I do hope that this is a good feel, not a feel that I have felt too many times before... Powerfully short and precise. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You are the master of brevity. (Not counting my carpe diem poem, that is.)  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Duncan, I understand this yearning feeling so well and to me dreaming of Joanna is the best part of my day too yet I know how much prettier it could be if I really had her! (big hugggsssss) Keep believing in this love and you will be together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
what a sweet love note to your lady...helen |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I do understand this one, Duncan...  ~ tons of hugsLyra |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
So short, so sweet, so lovely put! Enjoyed  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's the thought that counts, and there's so much that can be said in so few words. Dayumm Duncan, I wish it was that easy for me to write my feelings down. Really nice~ |
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