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The Tamed Beast
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The Tamed Beast |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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The the cutest little thing I've ever known. I still love this girl from three years ago.. God save my heart (I used to send her letters, confessing to her of the feelings for her that frightened me to tears.) We're friends. We're friends! Thank GOD we are friends! For friendships never end... What better a way to harness this feeling of mine that I bear for her, tender and sweetly careening through eternal caverns of soul started firewood essence of party days past... This love has a face now.. (I used to send her letters, confessing to her of the feelings for her that frightened me to tears.) This savage carnal beast has now been tamed.. This love is a friendship.. This love is peace. Taking comfort in this brings me volumes of strengh. Waves of it. Eternal. Complete. Nothing dares oppose it. Nothing. Friendships never end. Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very moving, Eagle. Has she seen this? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What better a way to harness this feeling of mine that I bear for her, tender and sweetly careening through eternal caverns of soul started firewood essence of party days past... ======================== Whoa...thats quite a poetic blending of imagery, analogy, metaphor and expression. very cool poet sir... and you are so right...when love can be kept in friendship rather than lost to time...thats always a very cool thing... Wonderful heart on sleeve declaration...its gift is its sincerety.  jm In the space between now and then |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so wonderful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Deja vu..*sigh* been there done that..I'll spare you the end results *walks away* but beautiful nonetheless.. Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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