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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-05 09:17 PM



Standing in your presence
my knees weak with desire
a burning inside
my passion on fire,
I'm unable to speak
as my body gives in.
I feel your love
so deeply within.

My thoughts
now your dreams,
your dreams
now my will.

Poised I stand waiting
waiting and still.

Release comes my love
with the touch
of your hand,

shaken and spent
I can no longer stand.

WhiteRose

"I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-09-05 09:33 PM


Hot! Hot! Hot!----I'm glad I'm sitting down!
---or I'd fall over because I've got the vapours!

Linda

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-09-05 09:36 PM


Oh Linda your response made me smile from ear to ear. You know how long it's been since I've heard someone use that phrase. "I've got the vapors"?  Well, let's just say ..too long and keep everyone guessing about our age.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-05 11:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderful, I love it, may loves presence always bring a spark to your heart of delight and joy! (kiss on cheek) This is spellbinding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2002-09-06 12:08 PM


wow, where'd you find that kind of lovin'? Dang, send some over here, I need some of that stuff. I only have getting up at 5am, work, and working out that makes me not be able to stand.
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