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BldWhtRose
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since 2001-09-24
Posts 38
Alabama USA

0 posted 2002-09-04 01:01 AM



We stand there and almost kiss,
but then pull back,  
and that's where it starts
It's a way of building
on the sexual tension already there.  
you want  to kiss
and be kissed,
but you wait,
building and building
making the real thing so much better

Lips touch, lips taste
Bodies intertwined
Urgent desperate love make
With all your cares resigned
To just this moment
Just this place
To this pressing need
Touch here, just there
All your passions heed

© Copyright 2002 Jonnie Jo Lee ~ BldWhtRose - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
1 posted 2002-09-04 03:01 AM


this is borderline adult topic! pretty steamy!
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-05 03:33 PM


Hot stuff here

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
3 posted 2002-09-05 10:05 PM


*fanning myself*..definately HOT in here.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-09-05 10:40 PM


Talk about building sexual tension in a write! Whoa baby!---No, "whoa baby" aren't the right words---it should read "keep on trotting!"---Sounds like you're hot to trot-----and it's contagious! teeheehee

Linda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2002-09-06 12:03 PM


this is hot! I love it!
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