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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2002-09-05 08:39 PM



Believe

Touch me and make me believe
that you are real
My love like the sun is bursting with
flames and is consistent in its power
Help me believe the sun is real
Please don't tell me,
"if you get too close you burn"

c2002SimplyGold

[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (09-05-2002 09:40 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-09-05 08:42 PM


oh my, that sounds so like me. I'm sorry, I hope you don't have to hear those words, or feel the burn.
SimplyGold
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2 posted 2002-09-05 08:49 PM


Passing Shadows,

Thanks for the input. It's been awhile since the last burn. I wear asbestos around my heart now.

SimplyGold

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-05 09:30 PM


"If you get to (too?) close you'll burn"
--believe me, I as well, have put asbestos around my heart to protect it after it was burned. But I didn't keep it there long---it was too lonely!---besides, the asbestos wasn't good for my lungs!!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-05-2002 09:43 PM).]

SimplyGold
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4 posted 2002-09-05 09:35 PM


EA,

You're right, I was just trying to be cute.

SimplyGold

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-09-05 09:36 PM


I understand this completely.
SimplyGold
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6 posted 2002-09-05 09:44 PM


Hey there SmartChick,

Thanks, for the input. Love is like playing with fire. Even though it can be hurtful, it sure is exciting...


SimplyGold

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