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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-09-04 07:18 AM


Popinjay

At times I feel a popinjay
In a supercilious way
For spreading sage upon the bread
Of saying things that I have said

Who really knows the truth of things?
Or hears the song another sings.
Each melody a song of one
And will not stop until it’s done.

In fact I’ve trouble with my own
I hear it in a monotone.
And often send it to the sky
To paint it like a butterfly

There, it hears a hum of views
Whispered in the wind in hues
That washes me in gyres suds
To bubble off the mires mud.

So do not try to rein the band
We are the music draining sand.



Hey, Toerag! Finally found your pic!

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (09-04-2002 09:24 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-09-04 07:22 AM


I waited up for you--

and it's always worth it, but for this line?

"we are the music draining sand"

oh, my sy? SIGH...

g'mornin' or g'nite...(depends on if you've slept)

YOU.

Tracey
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2 posted 2002-09-04 07:26 AM


What a lovely way to wake up…I’m hearing the birds singing along with you Sy. I for one, would never try to rein the band, for we all have something to say. And the more voices that surround us, the more beautiful is the melody.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-09-04 08:21 AM


Seymour~
Good morning, sir~

I'm voting with Serenity ....

'We are the music draining sand.'

What a wonderful day to head for the sandbox~
Love ya'
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Toerag
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4 posted 2002-09-04 08:30 AM


What great words of poetry
Sung with perfect melody
Can you add some harmony?

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-04 08:31 AM


"Who really knows the truth of things?"-----------You do!!

Linda

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6 posted 2002-09-04 08:43 AM


Good Morning Sy!!
OH I love this one!!
And my favourite line of course...
"We are the music draining sand."
Enjoyed...enjoyed!!
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-09-04 08:45 AM



Smiling, smiling, smiling....
going off to go build sand castles now...

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8 posted 2002-09-04 10:01 AM


Seymour - thankyou once again for morning smiles and sighs. Chris   p.s. love Toerag's pic!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-09-04 10:07 AM


Serenity,
love you too.

Tracey,
Your right,

Marge,
Your vote is counted,

Toe,
You mean you can sing too?
PS. You don't take many pictures but I did manage to find one.

Earth Angel,
Not really but thank you Linda.

Enchantress,
Good morning and hugs back.

Sunshine,
I'll meet you in the sand box.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-09-04 10:12 AM


Chris,
Thank you and toe's pictures are hard to find.

Martie
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11 posted 2002-09-04 10:25 AM


Sy

"Who really knows the truth of things?
Or hears the song another sings."

If anyone does, you do...or close enough to inspire as you always do.

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2002-09-04 10:49 AM


At times I feel a popinjay
In a supercilious way
For spreading sage upon the bread
Of saying things that I have said

===============================

There, it hears a hum of views
Whispered in the wind in hues
That washes me in gyres suds
To bubble off the mires mud.

So do not try to rein the band
We are the music draining sand.
======================================


Randy is the popinjay--
You're the poet with all the right words to say.
I say when ya got it flaunt it...strut your stuff
Let that dragon roar...huff and puff.

You, my poet prophet, could never be supercilious
You speak the truth each morn in poetic punctilious
I feast upon your rhyme's spread on wisdom's bread
the wisest words these mothy eyes have ever read

I like my poets and toast with lots of crust    *L*
your sage upon the page shall never turn to dust


~~~~~


That washes me in gyres suds
To bubble off the mires mud.



yer so cool

*ww*




VAS
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13 posted 2002-09-04 10:57 AM


can't recall what a popinjay is, but you're feeling as if you're one, then it must be a good fun kinda thing/being

enjoyed this poem and all the comments, too!

Toerag's an adorable creature, I certainly wouldn't have thought him to be that blue, but that mischeviously looking, YES!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-09-04 11:11 AM


Thank you for the picture of Toe. Now for sure, I won't be confusing him with RLbaba!
RLbaba is the better looking one! hehehe!

Linda

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-09-04 03:43 PM


Martie,
You are better then candy.

JM,
Your answering poetry is wonderful. And this crusty old poet loves it. WWRS


VAS,
Thank you sweet, enjoyed your reply.
Old Toe don't take many pictures ya no. LOL

Earth Angel,
Thanks for the candid reply.

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16 posted 2002-09-04 08:26 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, that Smurf-like creature is so cute, ooohhhhh...who has cute little bubble toes? (smiles) Couldn't help myself, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2002-09-04 08:42 PM


Thank you Noah for the read and bump.
Kethry
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18 posted 2002-09-05 07:44 AM


I never saw a popinjay
for one who knew would always say
as for the gyre's ire you may
leave me reeling any day
your words of grace can lift me high
and leave me with a taste for Sy.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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