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Beyond The Door's Light
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Beyond The Door's Light |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A Click The sound of love departing as a fragrance pulls me toward the light beyond and below the door. My love Can you not hear the breath of me gently caressing your ear beyond the door as hands lightly touch your lids your eyes, your face When Beyond the sight, within the feel a shadows light, so much surreal the touch, the trace of face the curve, the feel of lace Beyond Each ragged breath falls sliding down the door outside your heart The Door smooth to the touch of curve the flat of silk between two hearts Lies softly upon the white of sheer the sheer of sweet desire as passionate flames lap the walls of souls My Heart Pounding as does the drum of a thousand drummers in endless beat.In endless march toward the light Beyond the door.... As I whisper softly into the keyhole of your mind’s door. As a chain rasps against the brass of me till the door opens slowly, slightly Within your heart.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply wonderful. Enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such a wonderfully cryptic and silent comfort fills thes ewords, sweet friend, it is a beautiful feeling to softly eavesdrop and feel the whispers from just outside of anothers hearts! (big hugggsssss) Marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written, Barry! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...WOW!!... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Double "WOW!" for me----Thank you Enchantress for the perfect word to describe another fine love poem by Magnus. Linda |
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LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
A Click My Love When beyond The Door Lies My Heart Beyond the Door Within your heart good write, Mag |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A Click My Love When beyond The Door Lies My Heart Beyond the Door Within your heart" Yes Barry~ what a fantastic expression of love.....very lovely hugssssss Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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