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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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you parted lips as if to say but then your eyes thought better I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Short, but wonderful as well. Nicely done. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-23-2002 12:48 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mine kind of writing! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm in wonder of the breath control in this -- and what was imparted. Mike |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks, guys |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
brian, Some whispers are not heard, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh dang! This near took my breath away. EXCELLENT! I love it...and I'm keeping it! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Brian, this is wonderful, I love it, such passiona nd beauty always fills your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Brian I love brevity and this piece shines with it. Well done. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is a li'l sparkler, poetically that is. Was this about a woman? I mean, I've bitten my tongue clear through before. But a woman? Never known it to happen, myself. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Alright now, I simply can't let that go. Did wranx just say a woman can't keep her mouth shut?!  Darn, and I just proved him right didn't I??  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very nice, Brian... Sometimes eyes speak louder than lips...  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I hope you know how wonderful this is. You have captured a universal moment of humanity...I'll bet you even think in "stll shots"--this IS what that is...smiling... damn. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I'm overwhelmed. man, thank you all so much for this very appreciated brian |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
So much said with so few words. Expressive, visual and full of impact! Electra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
By the way..this right here? "as if to say" I love this, you took words and made a physical impact with them--I'm surprised a tongue did not come out to lick those lips--very visual, brian... |
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misery_made_beautiful Junior Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 36 |
keeps me guessing wondering Nice job here "Aging keeps life interesting" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
bump. |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Who was it said? 'the eyes are a window to the soul' I dont remember, Good write it made me read it just the way you intended, Zall |
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