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Open Poetry #22

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-02 12:29 PM

Real

my moon
rises and sets
in your eyes
I love your
darkened velvet
I can not deny
you touch
with a whisper
of waxen stars
behind
your shadows
I see
who you are
I run
to chase you
like a
chosen dream
the more
I have of you
the more
I want
it seems
you have taken
my castle
of sand
to highest rock
and in
your sweet hands
you have stopped
all clocks
you are
the velvet angel
that makes
time stand still
you have
taken my fantasy
and made it
real

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-02 05:37 PM

Beautiful as usual

Cold hands means a warm heart

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

2 posted 2002-09-03 12:09 PM

With sweetly chosen word you show us all that whom ever it was that said "reality bites" lacks in experience.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2002-09-03 05:24 AM

Slick Lady...I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing...Paul

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

4 posted 2002-09-03 06:59 AM

soooooooooooo perfect...I just love it dear,,,
I really feel it..Great words????

Keep writting such a nice poem like this....

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Nightshade