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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-09-01 11:06 PM




Silky sheets of lilac satin
Cover the bed where I lie
I'm propped up on some pillows
Attempting to catch your eye

Rose oil fills our senses
A perfect mood has been set
As you move your body closer
For a night we won't forget

The velvety texture of the satin
Slides down the length of my thighs
As I've captured your attention
And feel your temperature rise

Our bed of love is smouldering
From the candlelight all around
The room is filled with love
Here so much passion can be found

Tender kisses on my shoulders
Warm breath on my skin
These feelings are exquisite
They must surely be a sin

I tilt your head towards me
And taste your lips so divine
My flame of love is burning
In our love light how we shine

We move so well together
As our hearts join as one
Love will flow long after midnight
Until we wake to greet the sun



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (09-01-2002 11:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-01 11:22 PM


You're giving me the vapours! You write so hot it's enough to  make me consider changing my sexual orientation! Well, I may have exaggerated that a bit----but you get the picture!----It was a very enjoyable experience reading your poem---on many levels!  Ha! Ha!

Linda

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2 posted 2002-09-01 11:23 PM


Suetang... Such softly spoken words of love.
Very enjoyable. I feel the need for a cold shower after reading this. LOL...Paul

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3 posted 2002-09-01 11:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may sweet love always fill your heart and make you happy always every night and day! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-09-01 11:40 PM


"We move so well together
As our hearts join as one
Love will flow long after midnight
Until we wake to greet the sun"
I wish I had written that myself, Sue, this is so beautiful!


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