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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-08-31 04:43 AM


When will you learn?
(it's not the way)
It's true,
a heavy foot makes path--
but it kills
all that's alive--
the very carpet
padding wrath.

Like a noisy child on hike--
you wonder:

"Where did rabbit run?"

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-31-2002 05:09 AM).]

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Kethry
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-08-31 05:50 AM


I wonder that too, my children wonder, Where did the pigeon fly?
Excellent images
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-08-31 07:21 AM



To its warren...
to eat clover another day...

smiling here...
with tenderness....

Sandpiper
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land of flora and fauna
3 posted 2002-08-31 07:46 AM


So much said with so few words, insightful and to the point!
Severn
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4 posted 2002-08-31 08:12 AM


I like this miss k...I do I do...

nice bit of midnight reading to come across..

huggles

K

brian sites
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5 posted 2002-09-01 12:14 PM


rabbits may startle
but they always come back
to the clover
silly you
b

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-09-01 12:15 PM


Interesting

Cold hands means a warm heart

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-09-01 12:20 PM


smiling at you all---sort of a tribute to "the keeper of serenity"--I live with this man, y'see, he acts like a jerk, and then wonders why I hop away---*shake of the head, again*

well anyway, this one was for HIM---I thank you all...blowing kisses here!

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-09-01 12:39 PM


This one is just such a sweetie, Karen...
We have a lot of chipmunks in the woods behind our condo...but we have a solitary one who has his own bachelor pad just under the privacy wall in our little postage stamp front yard.
We also have a sundial with a stone chipmunk on it and the other day... he was standing up on the sundial talking angrily (we think) at this little stone chipmunk...
He probably was defending his territory against it...or he was trying to mate with it (wow talk about frigid women)
Wild animals are always scared of us because they live with so many predators...
~ scared chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Duncan
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9 posted 2002-09-01 12:47 PM


Does this guy have a sister?  Cause I think I used to live with her...lol.
btw, damn good poem!

[This message has been edited by Duncan (09-01-2002 12:49 AM).]

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2002-09-01 07:14 AM


ya clever gal...

enjoyed this Luscious.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2002-09-01 08:53 AM


Nodding with understanding agreement...
well said Karen.
~Hugs~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
12 posted 2002-09-01 10:18 AM


serenity,
The rabbit runs to stay alive, enjoyed.

Martie
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13 posted 2002-09-01 10:22 AM


serenity

I've always known you had get up and go.  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
14 posted 2002-09-01 08:17 PM


Inked again?
Oh no, say it isn't so!
I've missed reading you lately.
I always hear a heart beating softly in the background when I read your words.

Temptress
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15 posted 2002-09-01 11:20 PM


Ser,
you always seem to make these points just filled with strength and a bit of tender toughness. I loved this, Lady.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Paul Wilson
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16 posted 2002-09-01 11:45 PM


serenity blaze...If not for your explanation I would have missed this. Maybe you need to " blaze" your own trail and show this fellow two can play the game...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-02-2002 03:08 AM).]

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