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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-09-01 10:23 AM


“FIRE IN THE SKY”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
When the sun was at its highest,
I was caressed by the warmth…
It touched fondly into my soul,
from the depths came my breath…

It settled upon the mountain top,
embracing all of its majestic being…
My minds thoughts were mystified,
I felt my heart give in adorning…

Upon the river it did kiss tenderly,
calming, as one with your gentleness…
Fire in the sky beckons, engulfing me,
drawing me closer to awesomeness…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-09-01 10:27 AM


Bill

Where is this place of awesomeness?  It sounds wonderful...so does you poem.

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-09-01 11:14 AM


It's somewhere between here, there and
over yonder....  Didn't he tell you that....

BC...maybe you should be a painter versus
a poet...cause your canvas is always done
very well....

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-09-01 11:19 AM


Absolutely beautiful Bill!
Enjoyed this ever so much.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-01 11:32 AM


Bill, you've brought ME closer to "awesomeness" with this beautiful poem!

Thank you!
Linda

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5 posted 2002-09-01 12:01 PM


Bill...
What can I say but...AWESOME!!!
I loved it!!

Kitty

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-09-01 12:03 PM


Hey Bill,
That's a good one, enjoyed.

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7 posted 2002-09-01 01:00 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, this is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, and may the fires always swirl and light the skies of your heart and flicker with smiles to your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-09-01 03:05 PM


BC -- There you are on that mountain again. I think you are hiding 'awesomeness' somewhere near the summit. This was beautiful.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

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