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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-31 05:00 AM



Emotional Ink


this
is the
confirmation
you have made
me lose all
my concentration
my mind
continually
wanders to you
at times
when it shouldn’t
but it is true
and no
amount of ink
can cover
my emotions
to pour
on you
dripping to
over flow oceans
it is you
I miss
when away
and long
to hold
when is it
that this heart
of mine
got so bold


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-08-31 06:01 AM


Amazing presentation and deep thought as usual
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-08-31 07:18 AM



When did you get so bold?
When you let the emotional ink
touch the paper...

well done, m'dear...

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-08-31 11:35 AM


helen - touching lovely thoughts...

BC

arthur
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4 posted 2002-09-01 11:53 AM


nice #
arthur

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5 posted 2002-09-01 12:46 PM


OneSlickLady~

'when is it
that this heart
of mine
got so bold'


When ? .... just in time~

As always ... a gentle drop of ink~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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angel girl
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within a whisper...
6 posted 2002-09-01 01:43 PM


I like this very much.
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7 posted 2002-09-01 01:46 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Helen, this is so powerful, I love it, may your heart always be written with promises kept with no lies in invisible ink! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bslicker
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state of mind
8 posted 2002-09-01 03:09 PM


When?
Now


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-01-2002 03:28 PM).]

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