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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-08-31 08:31 PM



One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine
On that evening it's at Nan's place that I will dine
She said she will cook something up for me to eat
If I can stay awake, that would be lovely and neat

Emails are flying forth and back, information exchanged
The trips to Philly and Washington DC are arranged
She's coming too and will be travelling with me
That should be fun, I'm getting all so exited here see

My hubby is bragging he won't miss me, when he's alone
Ha, I'll bet when I come back he's just skin over bone
Nah...he's a great cook so he will do real fine I guess
But a housekeeper? No, so the house will be a mess

And Mushy, don't worry, I'll call you on time my dear
When my train is rolling in, you'll get real busy I fear
But who knows, maybe I'll hook some nice big fish
Then I'll cook it and serve a delicious fishy dish

For all those who will join us at the gathering weekend
I have only one warning, so pay attention dear friend
When you're asked if you want to share a room with me
Just SAY NO, because I snore loud and terrible you see

I think I'll hide somewhere at night where nobody can hear
Otherwise you lot will have a morning headache I fear
We probably will have, from all the booz and late night night
But who cares, when poets meet, it's just a pretty sight

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2002 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-31 08:33 PM




(giggles in delight) Yeah, that's right, who cares, every word and laugh is nonsense but you understand it and that is the beauty of poets meeting! (kiss on cheek) I wish I could meet you too, sweet friend, this is a wonderful heartfelt poem of excitement, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-31 08:36 PM


Sounds like a wonderful gathering of like minds. Wish I could join you!

Re your hubby---remember, absence makes the heart grow fonder! Enjoy the homecoming!

Enjoyed this poem

Linda


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3 posted 2002-08-31 10:32 PM


I'm still hoping I can go, Titia...
My leg hurts something awful and I had the bone scan yesterday.
We had a talkative tech...and he was showing us where the hot spots were and weren't.
There's one on my right knee which I know isn't cancer...its from an old injury and my left thigh...which is hurting me... when he saw that he said... oh yes, there is definitely something there... but he said that bone metasteses usually look solid and black and this looked more diffused...like a cloud almost....  So things still look pretty indefinite right now.  On Tuesday, or Wednesday... I should be hearing from my doctor, but one of the radiologists told me that they probably would do an MRI because right now, they can't figure out what it is...but I can hardly walk at all now, so I need to get this fixed before I can travel...and time is running out.  It will probably take a couple of weeks to get an MRI scheduled...so I am going to have to push people around a lot this week.  Fortunately...I am quite good at doing that.
So... I am still hoping that my pushiness will get me there to see you...
~ hoping to see you in Florida hugs

Lyra

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4 posted 2002-08-31 10:57 PM


Titia,
Now that is a lovely write and I can see you will be ready for action. It will be a pleasue to meet you.

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5 posted 2002-09-01 12:48 PM


Titia! You snore?!?! Please remember that Tampa is an area of many retired people who need their sleep. I can see the headlines already!! LOL! DUTCHIE DISRUPTS DREAMS OF DISGRUNTLED TAMPAXERS!!

It will be great to see you, snores and all!

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-09-01 12:56 PM


Michael... We'll just have to get her some of those strips you put on the outside of your nose, to keep you from snoring...
that way you won't get all of those old Tampaxers mad.
I sure would hate to see a mad Tampaxer

Lyra

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Neeraja
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7 posted 2002-09-01 06:33 AM


Oh Titia... I wish I could join you on your trip... sigh... mijn lief lives close to Washington DC...

Have a wonderfull trip Titia... and give all the poets a hug from me!!!



Neeraja

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8 posted 2002-09-01 07:56 AM


Titia,
you could always sleep at the bottom of the pool if you're worried about snoring. I can't wait!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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9 posted 2002-09-01 01:15 PM


Titia~
LOL - LOL ~
You and Bill could do a 'snore-duet'~

Tee-Hee ... I refer to them as 'cylindrical breaths' ...
such depth !

We can't wait ... we just can't wait !

Safe winging dear lady~

When they search your luggage ...
don't let 'em take Muys out ...
She and I have it all planned !

Wahooie !
Anticipation rises !!!
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge and Bill*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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10 posted 2002-09-01 11:43 PM


Counting down here... SEVEN....etc..

SmartChick
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11 posted 2002-09-02 12:17 PM


Oh Titia, you are going to have so much fun. I sure wish I could see you and everyone else. Maybe someday I will.
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 2002-09-02 12:35 PM


I'm skipping numbers 10-8-6-4-2-0!
They're here!
Come with appetites
See you soon, Tita dear and Nan
Already huggin
Liz

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13 posted 2002-09-02 12:44 PM


What a great time you're all gonna have!!!!!  (If they drink enough, even the snoring won't wake 'em)
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14 posted 2002-09-02 01:16 AM


Titia... Have a ball, have a blast
We all know good things never last...Paul

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15 posted 2002-09-02 09:42 AM



Titia, please do me a favor?  Knuffles everyone for me?  Please?     If I could be there, I'd do it myself, and an extra Knuffle to you to take back home to Muys!

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16 posted 2002-09-02 08:17 PM



Dear friends, all good wishes accepted, all good advice noticed, I'll share my knuffels with anybody (sorry Deer, but I've safed some special knuffels for you, so don't you worry)and yes, I'm planning to have a lot of fun!

Titia

Well did I screw up again. Everytime I translate a poem for me Mom I forget to set me back LOL


Life on the internet begins at...90!

[This message has been edited by Muys (09-02-2002 08:20 PM).]

Titia Geertman
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17 posted 2002-09-02 08:22 PM



So, that's better. I'm back

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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