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Open Poetry #22

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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-08-29 02:52 AM

grey
writ with
waver
glow

sewn
with a
wren's
bone

a night
transformed
by
alchemy

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-29 04:18 AM

sewn
with a
wren's
bone

--diligence
of thead in tear--

you continue to stun me, with words that spark of silent soul songs...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-08-29 02:10 PM

brian,
That creeped me out in the good Bauhaus way.
(the band
not the art movement)

Mike

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2002-08-29 05:30 PM

Interesting read. I enjoyed the feel of this poem. Great writing Brian, as always.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2002-08-31 08:47 AM

Well, this made me sit up and take notice...it's - fascinating. This is a truly fascinating poem. Gets under the skin yanno, eerie-like..

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2002-08-31 10:17 AM

quote:
sewn
with a
wren's
bone

niceeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2002-08-31 05:12 PM

so many visions...

more, please!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-09-02 08:23 PM

Wonderful write!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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