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tracie66
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0 posted 2002-08-26 06:17 AM



~eternity~

Tell me a story
one I'll never forget
a story of a time
when you and I first met
long ago way back in time
many moons before
a love story, a tale of love
one that will be remembered forever more
I long to hear that story
the way you remembered it to be
the story of two lovers
the story of you and me
whisper in my ear
all those forget-me-knots of time
the flowers smelled so lovely
the roses sent with rhyme
you always said
"precious words should be said with passion"
which is why you told me you loved me
in your very own fashion
you sent to me a posy
all tied up with bows
and in amongst the flowers
the poem you did compose
the words were ever so beautiful
they melted my heart in two
and from that first love poem
my heart surely knew
that we belonged together
your words they did inspire
they filled my heart and soul
with an everlasting desire
forever in love
forever our love will be
our love is one word
our love
~eternity~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2002 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-26 06:44 AM



A good old-fashioned feel about this, Tracie...I'm smiling, especially at the "posy"...

thanks for this!

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2 posted 2002-08-26 08:16 AM




(smiles) Oh Tracie, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love, the cute imagery made me smile like a little boy as true smiles shine in your words! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-26 10:06 AM


Tracie, this is so elegant and lovely and a true testament to your love.  Just wonderful....

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-08-26 10:10 AM


tracie66
A beautiful write, enjoyed.

Gabriel Frost
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5 posted 2002-08-26 11:36 AM


Truly beautiful.Inspiring.
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