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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-08-24 11:39 PM


The red waters had crested with the twin moons
The atmosphere of caustic gases lit the skies
In an aurora the planets magnetic charges excited the sky
On a pedestal on a crystal outlay we observed the magnificence

In a crystal ball protected from the hostile environment
A palace of no exterior walls
In force fields entrapping its occupants
Gravitating in the special needs of its visitors

Here the fire eagle could be found
In flaming red eyes that penetrates the sky
Visionary entities that have been blessed in tranquil serenity
Hovering on silent gases they float before the captive audience
Visiting within the minds in pure wisdom

Sending hypnotic thoughts caressing the sensual peace of living
The knowledge they evoke sends shivers of awareness
Appearing for those special enough to imagine their purpose in life
Then in a whisper so silent they would disappear
Leaving you thrilled to perfection

In a fireplace that sends aromatic light we cuddle
Immersing in the hallucinogenic effects of our being
For this honeymooned in seclusion
Was worth traveling light years to get


Thought: Sometimes you want to create a universe far off so that you can create a new world of images.

D.Lester Young (08/24/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2002-08-26 10:49 AM


Yep, that would certainly be a honeymoon in seclusion...provided there is no life on that 'other planet.'

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-08-26 11:18 AM


A delight in the imagination. Nice imagery. I'm booking a flight.

Enjoyed the read.

Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15
Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts
3 posted 2002-08-26 11:56 AM


This was really vivid.Excellent imagery!
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