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A Journey |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Journey Have you ever shopped a store? Where dreams await behind a door. And think which one you’d like the most Like choosing candy from a host. Have you ever dug so deep? You could not find the bottoms reap. Nor could you center out the core A well you dug in evermore. Have you ever tried to hold a scent? Pick a flower and hold its vent Remember all the tone of weld The entire nuance that it held. Do I strain the thoughts periphery? The omnibus and mystery Do you vacillate a claim? For that is really not my aim It’s just to let you know it’s there A journey that we all must dare |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think someone put something in your coffee this morning Seymour...giggle...love it! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh sigh Sy....great write.....just how many dictionarys to you have anyhow? |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is soooo good!!! I loved every word!!! Neeraja |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy -- what a great way to start my day!!! Our journey is always filled with questions and surprises. And that's what makes life so interesting. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Just a little dyspepsia. LOL Thank you. Toe, Thanks amigo, I do have the dictionary of time. LOL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey Sy, I had one of those dictionary's too....it was three and a half feet thick...I gave it to this friend of mine that does redneck crossword puzzles....(guess it was a little different version than yours) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja, Thank you my dear for the read and like. Marti, Have a good one and thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Perhaps, you know what they say about a rolling stone. LOL |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Have you ever tried to hold a scent? Pick a flower and hold its vent Remember all the tone of weld The entire nuance that it held.' Oh yes !  And a 'journey' within your rhyme ... devine !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And when asked, "What did you have for breakfast Enchantress?" She answered, "Why some of Sy's wonderful poetry of course... and I loved every morsel!" ~Morning hugs Sy~  ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You have just put rose petals on my path.  Enchantress, And you are the nectar of my morning. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh... this is beautiful... your graceful writing style and flow with the right words at the right place is simply marvelous to read... thank you  regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do I strain the thoughts periphery? The omnibus and mystery =========================== You dont strain it...you offer it up poetically and allow us the view thru you... and anytime we can see thru your eyes of wise..we end up with the prize. and as for that journey.... I'd follow you anywhere  Have you ever tried to hold a scent? Pick a flower and hold its vent Remember all the tone of weld The entire nuance that it held. Do I strain the thoughts periphery? The omnibus and mystery Do you vacillate a claim? For that is really not my aim could those verses be any cooler?  *winkiewinkie* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A devine journey Sey. Well done. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. JM, Could you be any sweeter. WWRS Gentle Spirit, Thank you dear. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And your wonderful words always take us on journies through your heart and imagination, sweet friend, this is excellent, I just love your fabulous style, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I guess all I have ever found were the bargain basement hounds but if you see the pedigree on such a store as this to see then know that I shall succumb and shop til I drop on my bum... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You abviously know how to shop....and the place you go is deep. I enjoy your poetry so much! |
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FLScarlet Junior Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 16 |
Excellent writing! You write with wonderful thought in mind. You obviously have written many things before. Thanks for sharing! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Have you ever tried to hold a scent? Pick a flower and hold its vent Remember all the tone of weld The entire nuance that it held. Yes I have....and yes, I love this! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mistletoe, If you hang around long enough some one is going to kiss you. Sunshine, You are a love. Martie, As I enjoy yours, FL Scarlet, You are welcome and thank you for the reply. Chris, And thank you for the read and comment. |
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