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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
gone... the cast in the mirror grayed by the fogged mind sighing for the words to find the elusiveness of you the need to create what once was, to fuel the fire tempts me to reach out steal from you a touch the loneliness, corners me the emptiness speaks louder than the silence of you and I stare, wondering what is its meaning? why does it weave me to complication, paint me flat, a victim of the calm before the storm? no longer can I hold pen to paper and see you there, between the lines, no longer is your shadow appearing, to guide my thoughts as I walk the hallways, that window of opportunity is now locked the power, the drive that once edged me ever closer to you is gone ~A~ |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Alice this is excellent writing I can’t recall the last time I ever felt the emotion so strongly. These particular lines are really some of your best as I walk the hallways, that window of opportunity is now locked the power, the drive that once edged me ever closer to you is gone Very well written   love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Amazing work...I wish I had wrote this one. Great work! DeaDiAmore |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
thank you Krissy...sometimes an alternate me comes forth and fields a different side of me hugs M/~A~ DD..thank you...I wish I hadn't felt this one coming..*s...does sort of go with your name now doesn't it?*S ~A~ |
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