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Magician
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0 posted 2002-08-14 02:40 PM


I’ve heard tales tell before
Of pulses made to quicken
From but a furtive glance
Yet I had not so been stricken

I have heard of those eyes
That sear through to the soul
Knowing the pain avoided
Somehow did not console

In the opening of this wound
For the very first time
I felt finally what others
Had spoke of in my mind

Know I now of singular beauty
Of a look that holds one bound
As visual acuity heightens
And mutes the slightest sound

Nothing else consumes me thus
So complete the obsession
That I do not wither away
Under her possession



© Copyright 2002 Magician - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-14 03:15 PM



Now this, this is going to curry much delight.  Welcome, Magician, to a whole new world of poetry...I'm going to enjoy having you around!  And I think you will find a few members who apparently have a lot in common with you!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-08-14 03:19 PM


Oh yes, this is delightful. Welcome to Passions. I too am going to like having you around.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-08-14 03:20 PM


Magician~
Welcome to Passions~

A lovely entry post~

You'll find much to enjoy and hopefully much to share in this circle that has no end~
Touching poet ... touching friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Magician
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4 posted 2002-08-14 03:20 PM


Thank you very much Sunshine. I'd like to know who these people are in common with me, I thought I was uncommon. LOL
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5 posted 2002-08-14 03:24 PM


You've whetted my appetite. Sate me! SATE ME! just kidding. Welcome to passions!

Squirrely Q

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-08-14 03:25 PM



Magician, if your name has anything to do with your life and/or hobbies, trust me, they'll find YOU!  *poof*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-08-14 04:26 PM


Magician?!!...as in abracadabra?
Sorry, I just got so excited by the pen name...
I almost didn't say....
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
I very much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to watching more of your illusions!
~Magical smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
*Poof*!!


*Please email me as I have a question regarding your user name.*

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magician
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8 posted 2002-08-14 04:30 PM


Thank you all!
Indigo
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9 posted 2002-08-14 04:43 PM


A glance that pulls her deep inside

Her pulse does quicken, her mind does race

With disregard for wounds or pain

And so she gives her heart with faith



Your words speak volumes, Magician.  Welcome!

Indigo


Martie
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10 posted 2002-08-14 04:45 PM


Magician

Welcome to Passions!  I don't "poof" but I can say I enjoyed your poem.

Magician
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11 posted 2002-08-14 04:58 PM


Wow, thanks Indigo.

Thank you Martie.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-08-14 05:30 PM


Magician
Welcome and enjoyed your write.

Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2002-08-14 06:30 PM




YAY!!! Hocus pocus, and voila, you have a gorgeous beautiful debut poem, I LOVE IT!!! This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I already know I am going to love reading your fabulous poetry! Welcome to Passions, sweet Magician, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tiersdin
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14 posted 2002-08-14 07:31 PM


*applauds*

outstanding...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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Gaia
15 posted 2002-08-14 07:38 PM


Welcome to these magical blue pages. I enjoyed your imagery, and hope to read more soon. Wave your magic wand here anytime, and you will have many readers.
rwood
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16 posted 2002-08-14 07:57 PM


Welcome to Passions Mr. Magician. I certainly hope you don't disappear. Your verse renders me to believe in the power of the eyes..hypnotic suggestions dear poet..

Sincerely,
Reg

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
17 posted 2002-08-14 08:21 PM


welcome to passions
Magicmystery
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18 posted 2002-08-14 09:34 PM



I was captivated by the read, Magician.... you weave a spell with words. I look forward to reading more of you .... in the blue.

Love, Light and Peace,
Sherry


Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (08-14-2002 09:37 PM).]

passing shadows
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19 posted 2002-09-05 12:10 PM


Ive heard of those eyes that sear too...
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Deep in the heart
20 posted 2002-09-05 12:28 PM


Welcome to Passions.  
I look forward to more of your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Temptress
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21 posted 2002-09-05 12:30 PM


*sigh*
Can you be my poet? Geesh..lol..not my love..just my poet.
Lovely, this..

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Dulcinea
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IN
22 posted 2002-09-05 01:49 PM


A very nice romantic debut, welcome to passions!
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