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Blue Kitty
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0 posted 2002-08-06 01:32 PM


I’ll take sandy shores,
The gritty feel once more, but of the touch of sand,
Not the dirt of the city,
I am a blue beach kitty, part water and part land,
Walking where surf will pound
Muting all the other sound, none come from man,
I walk away from the bright,
Leaving friends in the night, with none to hold my hand.
Give me the sandy shores,
Forgive me for the tears the pours, loneliness I will stand
Far from the cruel city
I am the sad blue kitty, part water and part land.

P.


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Kellie_Cantrell
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1 posted 2002-08-06 01:34 PM


This poem was full of breezes, it felt as if I were sinking my toes into wet gushy sand!!
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2 posted 2002-08-06 01:38 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhh...I love this, sweet friend, such inspiration always fill your words, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



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Blue Kitty
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3 posted 2002-08-06 01:39 PM


Oh, I will, I’ll try to, there is so much here and so little time.  I love to gush sand between my toes, rather be barefoot on sand than anywhere else.  The breeze part always seems to me around the beach and I love the wind in my hair too.

P.

Blue Kitty
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4 posted 2002-08-06 01:40 PM


Noah, you sneaked in on me while I was making a response, you are so sweet and kind it makes it fun to share.

P.

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5 posted 2002-08-06 01:46 PM


That was playful and sad at the same time -- just like staring out at the ocean.

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-KB

Blue Kitty
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6 posted 2002-08-06 01:50 PM


A little sad, but it’s about leaving.  Some time you just gots to get away.  Leave things behind that are dragging you down.  I always have loved the ocean from the time daddy first brought me to the shore, it’s a place of peaceful calm and excitement.

P.

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