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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-17 11:31 AM

Slow Man's Land

It took me by surprise, the question,
the dance, the closeness in the hands
of my first love.
I eased into his tempo,
felt the movements unwind my thoughts,
as time was lost beyond the spins
and I was caught in the
slow-going of this man's land.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2002-07-17 11:50 AM

Ah..another perspective! Enjoyed this.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-17 12:02 PM

Enjoyed this immensely!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-07-17 12:49 PM

Maureen...you wrote between
the lines...
Brava....

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-07-17 01:11 PM

Cool poem! Cool pic! Cool everything.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2002-07-17 01:29 PM

This was great! You took the suggestion and ran to a place where I stood watching you.

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

Proud Canadian

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-17 01:33 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is another wonderful look at the challenge and your words reflect the beauty of this love so much! (kiss on cheek) This is a fantastic response, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-17-2002 01:33 PM).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-07-18 12:46 PM

This is like looking through an eyepiece at the facets of diamond...

this sparkles with romance that is you, Maureen. A wonderful glimpse, full of spark and light!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2002-07-18 12:55 PM

Romantic in the real sense. For a moment, I was a young man again.

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-07-18 03:10 AM

Isn't this fun!
I loved your spin Maureen, it read like a soft swirl. Very pretty~

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