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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-12 11:57 PM



Love Affair With A Summer Moon

Riding in my car
with all the windows down
intense summer heat
torching my brow
smelling salt water in the tempting night air
feeling moonlight caressing my hair
escaping from my car
hot sand between my toes
running in my nightgown
not caring what shows
no one here but the man in the moon
what does Dear Abby know anyhow?
it’s my affair
this love I share
with a summer moon

BloomingRose


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-12 11:58 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-13 12:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Debra, this is sooooooo beautifully spellbinding, sweet friend, I just love the beautiful words you weave, this is fanciful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2002-07-13 02:23 AM


Indeed it is a love affair worth sharing and you always share so well in your verse.  Wonderfully said.
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2002-07-13 04:58 AM


there is nothing more enticing than a big summer moon, and to see it shining over the water is an invitation to run on the beach!  Your words put me right there, on that beach, and I applaud you for the pleasure!!!  

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


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