»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
Against My Heart
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
Against My Heart |
|
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
|
I've missed you long and wearily Your touch has faded slow My future calls me forward now Reluctant, I must go A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-05-2002 12:14 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
sigh beautiful and sad |
||
|
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a sweet, sad poem (Your picture startled me. You look so much like my husband did at that age, including the dimpled chin. Joyce |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Kris! This was simply stunning. So much beauty within so few words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
||
|
mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
It does take a lot of courage to give up. This is beautiful, so much is said in here! *hugs* mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
||
|
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I loved this little poem Kris! I am addicted to poems like this... a few words but telling a lot! Love, Light and Happiness! Neeraja |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
There sure is a lot of emotion here. You said it well. Sandra |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krishankins Short and sweet, enjoyed. |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, it happens that way. Sounds like you're dealing with it well though. Very sad, but no one ever said life was all happy, did they? |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
tsk to me...creeping in ever so late... You sure know how to say it Kris...just move on with gentle hand sweets... good advice I shall have to pass on!  love n stuff Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have a way in four lines of saying quietly all that needs to be said |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kris...been there..done that....many many times, and each was just as unpleasant as the one before....something you never quite get used to... Well expressed from the heart... |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wondeful thoughts expressed in so few words Kris. Good stuff! ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kris Sad truth..and found wisdom enjoyed! |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I remember moments such as this...James |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so very emotionally powerful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope you find all the love that favors your heart soon! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
