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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-05 07:50 PM


Satisfy my thirst
Give to me your love on tap
Take me once more to heaven
And use my body as a map

Whisper to me sweet nothings
Ignite my inner flame
In the passionate heat of desire
I'll be calling out your name

Smother me in warm soft kisses
Envelop my body with yours
At the end of love's performance
I'll be demanding an encore

Surrender to me your feelings
Let your passion run wild and free
Allow love to take over proceedings
As you immerse yourself in me

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
1 posted 2002-07-05 08:09 PM


Sue darling girl you are a healer of the night,  OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder.

I should have known when I saw your name on this that it would be incredible and it is utterly utterly first class I love it utterly utterly love it.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Temptress
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Mobile, AL
2 posted 2002-07-06 03:29 AM


lightly sensual write of love
I love it.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-07 03:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always share true love with your love forever and ever and may he give you all your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) This is another gem to your love library, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-07-07 03:29 PM


Makes me think of Liam. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-07-07 04:27 PM


Reminds me of the song "Gimme Some Loving".  James
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