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GRMcLean
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0 posted 2002-07-05 12:02 PM


When I'm at work, I've developed a quirk:
Feelings of being alone bring me to pick up the phone.
For the remedy of choice is to hear your sweet voice.
It makes my spirit lift and gets me through shift.
All feelings of doubt & despair are gone when you're there.
Even over the phone, I'm no longer alone.
My skin gets a tingle as our thoughts start to mingle.
You have given me such life just by being my wife.
Our spirits will sore forever more,
for together as one along with our three sons
we will travel through life with little anguish or strife.
It's God I must be thanking for the life I have in the making,
and yours I will always be since it's you who completes me.
When you hear a ring, to the phone I hope you spring
to lift my spirit high and never say good-bye.



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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-07-05 12:12 PM


Your lady is lucky to have you write like her a poem like this!
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-07-05 12:15 PM


I ditto Sharon...this is just charming--and so touching...gotta love a man who loves his woman in such sweet honesty!

nice.

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2002-07-05 12:26 PM


Sigh... It is so nice to read of such tender love.  Joyce
2dalimit
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4 posted 2002-07-05 08:35 AM


I'm glad your wife brings you such joy. I too, have such a partner.

Thanks,
Melton

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-07-05 08:40 AM


Nice! very nice!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2002-07-05 08:52 AM


Your wife is one lucky lady to have a man like you.
Decaflame
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7 posted 2002-07-05 10:57 AM



Certainly she appreciates all of your talents, and your writing, too...

good for you!

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