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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-07-02 07:03 AM

Searching for the plane…..

In the shadow of purple summer's night
I sense your touch, feel breath light,
thus comes to me calming memory,
a love I hold so dear, closely…

it was a night, such as this
when I held fast to your last kiss
stroked your brow, held your hand
and felt my heart in pain expand…

this space so void, this chasm so black
only in memory do I have you back,
two crystal goblets of wine I pour,
to drink to your memory ever more…

and as I taste this wine, bitter sweet,
night's summer warmness is replete
gently into its blackness I fall
as I search for you in crimson pall

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, a unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…

this life's long pursuit to not be denied
to re-kindle love, again be entwined
I will search, tho tears make eyes blind
there, on a plane, transparent as time

~*~

Revised from 2000

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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1 posted 2002-07-02 07:28 AM

this space so void, this chasm so black
only in memory do I have you back,
two crystal goblets of wine I pour,
to drink to your memory ever more…

and as I taste this wine, bitter sweet,
night's summer warmness is replete
gently into its blackness I fall
as I search for you in crimson pall

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, a unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…

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well ... you will already know this goes thru me like a stir of echos....
beautiful bittersweet write K.
Goodmorning Poetess of the sun

We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ... but the fall from the height.

E. McCain

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-07-02 07:48 AM

ms sunshine..
we revisit the places
we remember as love places
stay long in them and smile there

enjoyed your art

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-07-02 08:01 AM

as if someone is telling my world with his words... that is what I feel when I read this.... kind of deja vu....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-02 08:19 AM

Sunshine,
Your shining again. Wonderful write.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-02 08:48 AM

Wonderful Karilea...you stuck a chord here with this gem.
Enjoyed very much this morning.
~Hugs~

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-07-02 09:41 AM

Beautiful, but sad, Karilea. You always write such beautiful poetry.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-07-02 04:17 PM

Very nice Sunshine...James

Sven

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East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-07-02 04:20 PM

now, you know that I knew that you weren't talking about planes that fly when I read the title of this. . .

and, it's no surprise that I see that you understand far more than think that you do. . . because it's all here. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Auguste

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By the sea

9 posted 2002-07-02 04:51 PM

She rhymes and does so WELL!

Very nice, Karilea

suthern

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Louisiana

10 posted 2002-07-03 09:58 AM

This is bittersweet excellence, Sunshine. *S* Beautiful write!

Martie

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11 posted 2002-07-03 10:08 AM

Karilea

You keep the candle of heart lit in this one. Beautiful!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-07-03 10:11 AM

Sunshine,
for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, a unknown mystery
where your love I long to hold to me…

My fav lines.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

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Ohio, USA

13 posted 2002-07-03 10:11 AM

such powerful imagery it evokes deep feelings - thanks for a wonderfully written poem - Paul

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-07-03 11:06 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Karilea, this is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know this kind of overlooking feeling so so much and I do believe with all my heart you will find this joy always! (sigh) This is bittersweet but lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23

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15 posted 2002-07-03 12:42 PM

oh I simply love this...a sad, yet beautiful story unfolds here...

"two crystal goblets of wine I pour,
to drink to your memory ever more…"

loved these lines!

~marie@mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2002-07-03 01:11 PM

Perhaps on the next plain?

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-03-2002 01:11 PM).]

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