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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-01 06:08 PM



Shadows Kiss


I am lost
in reminisce
is this the way
shadows kiss
moon lit brush
of lips divine
once in dreams
now are mine
with you I flow
in star filled dance
reflection of silk
silhouetted chance
I can hear
an echoing sound
like shadows
with voices found
emerging
from dreams at night
intensifying
in morning light
they touch in ways
I did not know
and seem to me
in common flow

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-01-2002 06:34 PM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-07-01 06:56 PM


I enjoyed the flow of this---it poured out seamless as tho just ONE THOUGHT...and yet, was not rushed...like a sweeping slow dance.
Like...Ginger Rogers and Fred Astaire.

Well done, you two.

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-01 07:13 PM


Nice work you two!!! Loved it!!

                        

Krishankins

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-01 07:25 PM


You two du-et very well together.
Excellent!  Enjoyed thoroughly this evening.
~Hugs to you both~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-07-01 10:37 PM


Serenity took the thought right out of my
warped old brain....  This is beautiful.
So well done,  seems as though from one...

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