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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-29 03:13 PM



Transformed (for Norman)

do you see
that I have changed
from once I was
to rearranged
gaining much more in
what I thought I lacked
and who is gone
I don’t want back
anger once was
my fear set free
holding hostage the man
I needed to be
to touch in kindness
was a hard lesson learned
one man left
a better one returned


**for and about a fellow deputy**

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-29 03:34 PM



Though this is in tribute to a friend of yours,
it's meaning is apparent, and a good message...
well done!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-06-29 03:55 PM


1slick_lady
Excellent writing, enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-06-29 04:08 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just know Norman is going to love this so very much! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-06-29 06:45 PM


Great message and good thoughts for a good journey. ThisDiamond
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-06-29 06:58 PM


Well done Helen!
~Hugs~

Krishankins
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6 posted 2002-06-29 11:43 PM


Bravo! Bravo!

Excellent Helen!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

peppermint35
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7 posted 2002-06-29 11:59 PM


Helen, really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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