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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-28 04:24 PM



Inseparable

we walk the fog
as shadows
clinging to each other
like ghost
suspended unclearly
through boundaries
existing inseparable
from the host

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2002-06-28 04:56 PM


Exactlly where we started from.



Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2002-06-28 04:58 PM


but things change...
glad you liked the poem anyway

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-06-28 06:37 PM


shadow and skin , I like what you've done with this.
Kethry

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4 posted 2002-06-28 09:53 PM




(sigh) Oh Helen, I just love the way you express yourself, sweet friend, this is a wonderful way of looking at this point of view! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-06-29 02:27 PM


Helen,  

This has a tinge of mystery to it...and I
am open to a hint or two.....

It is an intriguing poem....thank you...

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6 posted 2002-07-04 12:54 PM


Nice "unity" you've presented. Yet another mystical write from the slick one!!!

Kris

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