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Open Poetry #21

A Victim Of Your Love

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-04 12:54 PM

I'm diving so very recklessly
Into your sensual sea
Waves of love and desire
Are lapping all around me

I'm sailing with you on the ocean
You and I are the only crew
As the sun sinks below the horizon
I find that I'm anchored in you

I'm losing all of my senses
For your love has claimed my soul
To be lost in your love forever
Would surely be my ultimate goal

I'm falling under your spell
For I'm a victim of your love
We were meant to be together
For we fit like hand in glove

I'm savouring each hour we are together
Can we freeze this moment in time
Our hearts are beating in unison
Feelings of tenderness so divine

I'm swimming with you under the moonlight
Illuminated by a galaxy of stars
We'll reach the peak of our passion
As we sail towards heaven past Mars

Your love draws me in like a magnet
So engrossed in one another we are
You are the wind beneath my wings
My guiding light, my shining star

Suetang

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-07-04 01:52 AM

Sue,
I liked it indeed. Nice job again.

Show you care to those you love...today.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-07-04 04:55 AM

Lots of beautiful expressions of tenderness in this piece Sue.....Superb romantic write!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2002-07-04 08:45 AM

Be forever in Love Sue, enjoyed the read.

Sincerely Rick

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-04 08:55 AM

Sue,
A delicious read, Enjoyed the taste.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-04 11:25 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you always sail beyond Venus and Mars into galaxies of endless happy dreams come true, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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