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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-25 04:30 PM


I feed my hope with dreams of love
And pray it doesn't leave
Surviving in your feathered touch
I've found my soul's reprieve

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-25 04:33 PM



Keep the hope, and
love shall find you...

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2 posted 2002-06-25 04:42 PM


Well done, Kris.  I love the "feel" of of this piece

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-06-25 04:44 PM


sorry. . . I couldn't help but think of Gershwin. . .

excellent work. . .

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4 posted 2002-06-25 08:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Kristopher, this is beautiful, sweet friend, having hope in llve is the most beautifully uplifting feeling of all and in the end it is always worth the wait! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-06-27 02:30 AM


Kris,
It's an excellent plan. Nice.

Show you care to those you love...today.

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6 posted 2002-06-27 02:33 AM


I'll keep my fingers crossed for you sweets...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-06-27 05:12 AM


Excellent writing...James
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