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Open Poetry #21

Splender in the Grass

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-06-27 03:19 AM

So, then she cried & loved every tear
Smiling at herself as her faced flushed
Wondering . . .
    How long it had been

Composure she found
    Wincing at the ruined makeup
Laughing once more . . .
    As he walks away
             Confused
         Bewildered
       Ashamed
          Shocked

Laying in the grass
    Its been so long
So, then she cried
        Picking wildflowers
Then, learning to let go...

~*~ Thank you MidnighSon for the last line

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

[This message has been edited by MIdsummerRain (06-27-2002 03:21 AM).]

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-06-27 03:29 AM

I love the simplicity here. It holds so much within it's grasp.

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-27 03:29 AM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Rayne, this is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, yes, always get up and rise again and hope for what your heart desires, for there is always a rainbow after a storm! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

dwarfdroppings
New Member

since 2002-06-26

Posts 6
UK

3 posted 2002-06-27 04:44 AM

beautiful..sad but with a certain freshness. I loved this.

Only my opinion, if you require a gaurantee............buy a toaster!

[This message has been edited by dwarfdroppings (06-27-2002 04:45 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-06-27 05:16 AM

Like this...a lot...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-06-27 05:58 AM

learning to let go is awfully hard at times...
enjoyed your words
*s
M

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