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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-06-25 12:52 PM



you are my guitar
I hold you close and firmly
strum your strings softly

Inspired by :Music Of You

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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1 posted 2002-06-25 12:56 PM


I've finger picked a few myself....
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Toe ~
Thanks for the visit ... maybe your first?  
Oh, by the way, I wasn't thinking of the nose.


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-25-2002 01:05 PM).]

HopeS
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3 posted 2002-06-25 01:08 PM


strings I bet you caress with grace
was that guitar rhythm or bass ??
Hope

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-06-25 01:13 PM



No...a lovely, slender, violin...
this is beautiful!

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5 posted 2002-06-25 01:32 PM


Bob darling heart Ohhhh the beauty in this outstanding it simply is incredible writing. You know how much I love your writing darling boy, for there isn’t another soul whose touch reaches so far into the soul. Why can you do this so constantly? I only know you do, there are writers whose words caress my soul, there are writers whose words descend on my soul like drifts of lace, but you always know exactly what to write to work the magic.

You can run your fingers over my strings anytime, this is magnificent darling boy utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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6 posted 2002-06-25 01:46 PM


Hope ~
Actually, I prefer rhythm as I sing  

Sunshine ~
A violin?  Me?  Of course!  I'm a Texan.  I can do ANYTHING     
I can see it now ... I'm astride my hoss playing a violin as I sing to the cattle ...
what a picture

Marsha ~
Wow!  Does that mean I have to clean my boots real good     
Your compliment leaves me speechless and just slightly red under the collar (but the tan hides it well)


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-25-2002 02:20 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-06-25 02:03 PM


Dang!!  Climb onto that hoss and gallop him up north!  
This one darn near made my toes curl!
Mmmm...hugs!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2002-06-25 02:28 PM


I can hear the vibratory response of her soul already.

good....VERY good.



Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

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9 posted 2002-06-25 02:39 PM


Nancy Lee ~
Your ... toes ... curled?  Shux, gal, I've got a pickup with 300 horses in it.  Just give me the directions

Krishankins ~
I think your first visit to my work ... welcome and thanks for the kind reply


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-25-2002 02:51 PM).]

Toerag
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10 posted 2002-06-25 02:44 PM


Whatta 'bout them nose pickers
Ain't they a bunch
Pickin' they noses
Havin' it fer lunch

Them everlovin nose pickers
Aint they cute?
Some use a fore-finger
Pickin' they snoot

Wanna be nose picker?
Don't need a ticket
Just watch Balladeer,
He'll teachya-how-ta-pickit!

kayjay
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11 posted 2002-06-25 02:56 PM


Nicely done.  I love my guitar too.

to pluck at that string
to make one's heart ring
there is no finer quest

it offers that spark
on stage or in park
that gives the soul its rest


Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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12 posted 2002-06-25 03:02 PM


Toe ~
I can't say much now, I'm headed for cover!

kayjay ~
I can only play Tom Dooley with the C, F, and G chords
Right now, you'd best get to solid cover, a war is about to erupt and it just may reach clear to Oregon...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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13 posted 2002-06-25 03:15 PM


definition : you
butterflies in a basket
rainbows on a string

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14 posted 2002-06-25 03:15 PM


Nice....and what would happen if you
softly strummed her tightening strings?

Surely not till they broke!!!!

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15 posted 2002-06-25 03:27 PM


Helen ~
Does that mean I'm hooked?

Magnus ~
Of course not.  Remember that as the strings tighten the sensations become much more pronounced

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-06-25 07:25 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I love playing guitar and dream of serenading my dream girl! (sigh) This is soooooo beautiful and strums the heartstrings, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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17 posted 2002-06-27 02:23 AM


Interloper,
Finally, an instrument I play well!

Show you care to those you love...today.

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2002-06-27 06:09 AM


well if your from Texas then that would have to be a fiddle correct??  lol....well done Interloper.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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