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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-03 06:45 PM




Music Of You

heart beat played again
soothe me softest lullaby
the music of you

symphony of life
harmony from two now one
play now my heart strings

piano solo
soft touch between black and white
keyed to perfect tune

violins now start
instrument of hearts echo
played by your sweet bow

strumming soft guitar
play me up close tenderly
there is where I flow

touch now breaks silence
perfect collection of cords
spin all of your strings

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-03 07:43 PM


BEAUTIFUL Helen!!
These are very very well done!
Enjoyed so very much this evening.
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Suetang
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2 posted 2002-06-03 07:49 PM


Beautiful words and music.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2002-06-03 07:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing like a choir of angels from the heart and make music to all these pages! (kiss on cheek) This is melodious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-06-04 10:07 AM


What beautiful Senryus!
~*~
you are my guitar
I hold you close and firmly
strum your strings softly

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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