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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-06-24 05:58 PM


Summer's Thirst


So hot this day,
as thoughts and words mix
and the dripping of feelings
whet my appetite for a Summer of you.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-06-24 09:11 PM


Maureen darling girl YOU are a superb writer my friend and this is utterly stunning in its brevity and sensuality

Fabulous writing Absolutely excellent I love the lines and the construction you really have expressed so much in this. Excellent absolutely wonderful Utterly utterly perfect I love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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2 posted 2002-06-24 09:23 PM


Wynter~
Your words drip the desire~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-06-24 09:23 PM




(smiles) Oh Maureen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I feel such gorgeous desire shine in your words, this is lovely, may your summer be filled with smiles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-24 09:51 PM


oh yeah M, this is just wonderful...

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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5 posted 2002-06-24 10:24 PM


Excellent. And now ah'm all thirsty. Even with that preceding surfing idiot -- you can't drink the ocean, it's salt water!

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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