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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279
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Sunday comes in circles now. Half wasted in a jar. The other half the pretty things The knowing not so far. Time be measured in a blade. Green and growing there. Where Sunday come so frequently These paths exhibit wear. And I the lonely one to keep score and where we head. Shall breathe a song, live a dance Before I meet the dead. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where Sunday come so frequently These paths exhibit wear. And I the lonely one to keep score and where we head. Shall breathe a song, live a dance Before I meet the dead. ============================= this is a haunting, lovely write Lady A ... this whispers to me of B-Shelly and Will Shakes with its phrasing and meter...tis not often you rhyme...but oh how well you do when you do. Good to read you my girlie-girl mothyme When your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, I just love the way you describe aspects of life with perfect artistic interpretation, sweet friend, this is wonderful and comes to show the wonderful talent you have, always live on and keep on dancing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alicia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-23-2002 11:05 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
hurry, hurry, write another it's too good not to have company from another one of your lettered portraits. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul [This message has been edited by Krishankins (06-24-2002 12:02 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
life goes from one Sunday to the next, and much of us just live on th weekends..that's the pity of thos circle of life..neat poem, welcome to Passions  |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
great poem."I think I go home." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
she rhymes!  Hey, miss A! You trying to steal my JOB? heh heh... I adore this...the seemingly simplicity of it lends to the message and certainly emphasizes the point. Yer too cool. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Once again, my friend, you have blown me away. Wonderful! All writing comes |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
loved it. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I enjoyed the read Alicia... Thanx4sharing... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I see that you're reaching out into new things. . . that's good. . . peace my friend. . .always. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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