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My Solitary March
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My Solitary March |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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My Solitary March There's nothing soft about the pastel blue rains that fall There's something of harsh about this day I'm given So, allow me my solitary march through nature at best Where trees outnumber all other life form living... I indulge everything that surrounds me out here For just a sweet release I've been needing within Every time the blue rains seem to dampen the earth I take my solitary march straight to him... When my mind doesn't brake from troubled waters I invite myself to where all bitterness is gone Take every step, one at a time, sipping everything he's made of Trying not to interrupt the ground I walk upon... He's in every part of the world that resembles calm and comfort And, just like nature he is always near I stumble on dried leaves from a winter that once was And, it's sound reminds me we're the only ones here... I inhale the swollen sun with it's extreme warmth it offers Give thanks to both him and it's arms that encircle me whole I thirst for the only relief my solitary march can grant me And, my hunger for compassion ends on my solitary stroll... For, I know he must feel me needing him like this An abstract tap to the heart that I'm needing a lift I'm on a quest to believing to feeling my friend My solitary march to paradise for all the places I've been... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful inner spiritual poem Saunni. The wonder of all that is so comforting! Thanks for sharing. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
ethome, thanks for reading this. You always have kind words.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"He's in every part of the world that resembles calm and comfort And, just like nature he is always near I stumble on dried leaves from a winter that once was And, it's sound reminds me we're the only ones here..."  BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, He is everywhere and I know as long as you take the time and feel the charity in tranquility and peace He offers you will always be blessed by His loving grace! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully uplifting, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I indulge everything that surrounds me out here For just a sweet release I've been needing within Every time the blue rains seem to dampen the earth I take my solitary march straight to him... A lovely look at your inner self, Saunni... Thanks for sharing you with us.  ~ meditative hugsLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Saunni, simply lovely. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...I read it once before, and I read it again just now...and it touched me deeply both times |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you are finding, my friend, that we are never alone. . . and that is good. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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