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One thing I know for sure
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One thing I know for sure |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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Little threats you make to me Trying to give me some fear Your anger I will not give into Neither will I cry another tear Forever are you griping about The few things you do for me Even the things which I needed Those things were a neccessity No longer will you have to fret You will never know what I need I will keep all my needs to myself And all your money you can keep For fifteen years I lived by myself I can always live alone some more My life was alot more happy then This is one thing I know for sure By Sue 6-21-02 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very poignant write Sue, with much strength held in the words. Well done. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
resolve and defiance rumble through this powerful poem - thanks - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It sounds like he did something to make you mad.... I hope its all better now, Sue.... This reads like a poem written by a proud, powerful woman. Keep up the good work.  ~ womanly hugsLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What Lyra said...times two....Ditto! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, You will be fine, a powerful write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I'm so sorry you've been treated this way, swet friend, I'm with Lyra, my heart goes out to you but you are also a very loving and strong person and I know you will find much better happiness to compensate for this! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sue...this IS powerful...and do i ever wish i had written this !!!! helen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl This is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered. And the form perfect absolutely perfect. A piece written by a woman who knows what she wants and knows she can get it, this is wonderful, I love this declaration darling girl absolutely love it  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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