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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-20 05:15 PM


Obstacle's To Love

I will tell you although
I'm quite sure you probably already know
that there are obstacle's to love.

If someone really loves you
they will most likely persist
through all of these obstacle's
and love will still exist.

And if they don't.
Most likely they won't.

JamesLee
June20
2002

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Kethry
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1 posted 2002-06-20 06:03 PM


Philosophical poem. I liked it
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-20 06:10 PM


I always like how you're so concise with your work James......This is the pure truth!
catalinamoon
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3 posted 2002-06-20 08:45 PM


Is this why I persist, in the face of all reason?
Good thoughts, James.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-06-20 09:30 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this is so very true, love indeed has its obstacles and we must be willing to surmount them or love can never be true! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-06-20 09:32 PM


It would not be love if you did not face some sort of obsticles.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-06-20 11:44 PM


The truth in a nutshell, James...

Very nice

~ hugs of truth

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

devina
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Cali
7 posted 2002-06-21 01:01 AM


Don't I know it sweet James...

hell- I chased my beautiful man for almost a year...talk about persisitance...

*remember us women have the advantage....* EG~

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2002-06-22 10:10 PM


If someone really loves you
they will most likely persist
through all of these obstacle's
and love will still exist.

And if they don't.
Most likely they won't.

exactly!!  And there's the answer~
but I still don't want to hear it!  
Liked the way you said it though~

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