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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2002-06-20 05:04 PM

Fly Away

You are
a mite of an irritation,
a mere housefly
in my castle;
so don’t be getting’
any ideas
that you are more.

You are
incapable of thought,
steered by instincts,
so don’t be buzzin’ me
with your monotone song;
don’t be gettin’ any ideas
about touchin’ down
on my skin.

You belong
on the ass of an ass
or slurping slop
from the bottom of
the trash,
so fly away boyhhh,
before
I call my
bug eatin’
cat.

© 2002 CM Bailey

[This message has been edited by Corinne (06-20-2002 05:05 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-06-20 08:14 PM

Corinne,
Don't know how this slipped by but I'm bumping it back. Strong write enjoyed the read.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-20 09:40 PM

BRAVO!!! YOU GO GIRL!!! (BIG HUGGGGSSSSS) Oh Corinne, I can feel frustration and sadness in here and my heart goes out to you but also I am so proud you had the heart to say how you feel, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-20 09:41 PM

I know how this feels. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-06-21 06:36 AM

you have a way with words
and insects too
interesting images ms Cor

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2002-06-21 08:43 AM

Corinne - I have never read a better poem about Toerag. Well done! lol

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-21 08:46 AM

Excellent write Corinne!
Enjoyed thoroughly.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-06-22 10:39 PM

You go! Swat that sucker would you!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-06-22 10:43 PM

Vaya, mi hija!!!!!

You need a bugman!!!

I'm ready!!!

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