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Soft Sigh (senryu)
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Soft Sigh (senryu) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Soft Sigh A soft sigh goodbye Fluttering on the gentle Wind of memories "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautiful Tara, have missed you here. Hope things are better for you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Tara.... Have missed you! ~Hugs~ *Hey the font color matches your hair!*  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Tara, this is a sad but beautiful senryu, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and now I wish the new love you have to your heart to have you sighing softly happily always and for you always to hold your past love in your memories, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is beautiful Tara....You have got this style down really well! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tara, very sad but beautiful and touching senryu. i hope everything is okay with you. i'll be in touch. love ya hon. amy "you can't stop |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry - I'm glad you liked it. Enchantress - Thank you Noah - I'm glad you stopped into read. ethome - I love this form of poetry thank you.Aimster - Hey chickie. I miss you  Thanks for reading.the_loner - Thank you "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
At least there are a few names I still recognize. Wonderfully written and fills the template of a Senyru perfectly. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful..  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - It is soooooo great to see your name I hope you are well! Thank you for stopping to read, I'm off to take a look at your poem now! I get all excited when I see something from you, it doesnt happen often. Of course, I haven't been here much lately lol. Life and some other factors has kept me from coming in as much as I once did. Ok, now that I wrote you a letter... errr... thanks  Jenn - Thank you chickie. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (06-21-2002 08:32 PM).] |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The essence of a thought.One good sentence describes a tree often better than a whole book of words. paladin |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh how very pretty, Tara...  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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