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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-13 10:58 PM



Little Daffy Dundlehead
~*Marge Tindal*~

Little Daffy Dundlehead
slept upon a trundle bed
Could get much lower than that
LOL ... that's where it's at !

Fluffed the pillows in her bed
whispered prayers in her head
Counted sheep in quiet leap
across the fence of meadowed sleep~

Snored her way in little zzzzzzz's
to The Cave of the Good Dreams~

*Goodnight rugrats ...
you too, June~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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1 posted 2002-06-13 10:59 PM


LMAO That was too funny. yet I like it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-06-14 01:19 AM


Little Daffy Dundlehead
slept upon a trundle bed
Could get much lower than that
LOL ... that's where it's at

Thanks for a laugh before bedtime, Marge...
I just looked at my watch....
bedtime was over an hour ago.
I am too addicted to this place but I love it.

~ sleepy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-06-14 02:23 AM


ahhhhhha, very cute Marge I have missed reading you!
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4 posted 2002-06-14 04:01 AM


He he Marge you got me smiling girl!   Good one!
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5 posted 2002-06-14 08:43 AM


Julie~
Hope it gave you a little *giggle*~
Thanks~

Lyra~
I just LOVE sharing a little laugh to send you on your way
to The Cave of the Good Dreams~
LOL @ 'addicted' ... that happens ???

SEA~
DANG !! It's GOOD to see you girl ~
Welcome home~

ETHome~
Well ... sometimes ya' just gotta share~
Thanks sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

Hi June

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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6 posted 2002-06-14 10:36 AM


Very cute!
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7 posted 2002-06-14 11:11 AM


Margie girl darling heart sister, oh my how much I love this poem, it has a pure joy about it. All the fun and frolic of childhood wrapped in this darling girl utterly utterly splendid, and of course it’s good you wrote it. When you do cute you always excel, however whatever you write is brilliant and this is splendiferous. I love it utterly

Wonderful utterly wonderful writing
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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8 posted 2002-06-14 11:17 AM


*giggling* Oh my...I absolutely love this....LOL

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-06-14 12:50 PM


TexasRose~
Thank you for letting me share a *giggle* with you~

MarshaLove~
You know that sometimes my *tickles* just get the best of me ...
Just wait until September !!!!

StarTime~
I love seeing you here, gal~
Thank you for popping in on this one~ *smile*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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10 posted 2002-06-14 03:21 PM


What a great name, Daffy Dundlehead! This is just an adorable write and one that has me giggling. This Daffy retirement chick stayed in her non-trundle most of the day. Haven't slept like this since BC (before children :-) ! ).
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11 posted 2002-06-14 04:59 PM


With a title like that, how could I resist? *G* This tickles the smiles out of hiding, Marge... just what the end of this day needed. *S*
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12 posted 2002-06-14 05:16 PM


Liked this one Margie....Balladeer counts sheep too.....(his future conquests))...good job sweetie!
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13 posted 2002-06-14 05:46 PM


What a neat little verse! I love the way it swings.

Nan

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14 posted 2002-06-14 10:43 PM


MartiRetiredi~
Glad ya' found a *giggle*~
Girlfriend ... you DESERVED to sleep~
LOL @ 'BC'

SuthernGal~
LOL ... You know a *giggle* just looks sooooo good on you~

ToeMan~
LOL .... how hard can it be to count to ONE~

Are you insinuating that Balladeer ... sheep ? ... Nah !!!!
Hmmmmm ?  LOL ... you're a sweetie~

Nancy~
Thanks gal ... sometimes I just have to play in my ink~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-07-06 01:42 AM



Marge-
Smiling big over this one.
This is too cute.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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16 posted 2002-07-06 04:03 PM


Vicky~
Thanks, hon ... e-mail server down ...
so can't get back to you YET !!!
But I will ... I promise~
You packing for Florida in September ?
Love ya'
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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