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rwood
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0 posted 2002-06-10 03:37 PM


Rushlight speaking
across weaves of seas
and sparkles of me
glitter
breathless
Little girl grin
home
safe
and sound
in your arms
My heart
does a cartwheel
I flip
You don't mind
if everything shines
it's yours
It's so yours
Lace
gloss
soft
and all
hand me a daisy
and sky dance
with me
it's almost
summer
tonight


© Copyright 2002 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2002-06-10 03:44 PM


little girl flowers sounds
sticky fingers holding
woman eyes smiling

enjoyed this view Regina

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2 posted 2002-06-10 03:48 PM


Wow, now that is how summer feels in my heart.

Thank you for the read.

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


Martie
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3 posted 2002-06-10 03:52 PM


Playful, warm thoughts, Regina...I enjoyed!
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-06-10 03:55 PM


I enjoyed this read very much.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-06-10 03:57 PM


hand me a daisy
and sky dance
with me
it's almost
summer
tonight
----------------
Dang girl!!  I just love the way
your muse comes up with these way cool lines!!
Love this one Regina!
~Summertime hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Larry C
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6 posted 2002-06-10 04:01 PM


Reg,
=================
Little girl grin
home
safe
and sound
in your arms
============

Sure...just push me over the edge.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Sven
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7 posted 2002-06-10 04:15 PM


hand me a daisy
and sky dance
with me

here you go!!  

love it Reg. . . let the sky feel your feet. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-06-10 04:17 PM



I like the pleasant feel
of this bit of cartwheeling...
you know, you know!

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-06-10 05:44 PM


A tickle, a giggle, and all aglow...

wonderful!

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-06-10 05:56 PM


rwood,
Almost? I'd say it was.

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11 posted 2002-06-10 06:53 PM


Itsa gonna be a hot time in the old town
tooooonite!!!!  That Regina,  she canna
write!

vandana
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12 posted 2002-06-10 07:21 PM


enjoy your read
rwood
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13 posted 2002-06-10 11:09 PM


Dark: Blushing hugs..Thanks for You..

Lady: I'm so happy you felt that way. Thank you and so nice to meet you.

Martie: Playful is still so good isn't it. Thanks so much.

the_loner: I enjoy your thoughts..Delightful to meet you too.

Nancy: I appreciate your appreciation of such. You amaze me! Thank you hugs!

Larry: Oh no..I can tell by that grin you're still hangin' in..Smiling with you guy..

Sven: You know I must..and you are sooo good to me! Hugs!

Sunshine: I love a lady that knows how to enjoy a good cartwheel! Hugs!

Tiersdin: Exactly! Thank you so much.

Sy: Yes..but it's in the celebration! Thank you hugs

Magnus: LoL! Well maybe it's not me..it's just a heat wave. Hehe. Smile at you.

Vandana: Hugs to you! Thank you.

Sincerely,
Reg

[This message has been edited by rwood (06-10-2002 11:11 PM).]

Janet Marie
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14 posted 2002-06-11 12:52 PM


Rushlight speaking
across weaves of seas
and sparkles of me
glitter
breathless
===============================

breathless....yeah...thats a good word for it
you sure know how to get the readers attention with your opening lines and images.
that above verse is poetry in motion.
Beautiful Reggie-girl!!!!

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2002-06-11 04:59 AM


Lovely...just lovely...James
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16 posted 2002-06-11 11:37 PM


Oh you cheeky little thing you!  How "I gotca" was this?

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-06-13 12:22 PM


Rushlight speaking
across weaves of seas
and sparkles of me
glitter
breathless
Little girl grin

You have a beautiful way of saying things, Reg...I really enjoyed this.

~ breathless hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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Deep in the heart
18 posted 2002-06-13 01:04 PM


If you're sky dancing, it must be a polka or the shuffle

Magicmystery
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19 posted 2002-06-13 03:01 PM



=====================
Rushlight speaking
across weaves of seas
and sparkles of me
=====================
smells like lightning in the air.... gonna be a great summer!!!

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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20 posted 2002-06-17 09:18 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always packed with grace and budding with flower power! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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21 posted 2002-06-17 09:55 PM


just wonderful - thanks for a captivating read!!
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