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On a Can of Coke

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Juju
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0 posted 01-25-2010 03:39 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Find something you physically see on a can of coke and relate it to something going on in your life. Mine will be up in a little. If you have a different name for coke go ahead and change the title.

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum112/HTML/000254.html


-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (01-25-2010 04:12 PM).]

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1 posted 02-13-2010 09:01 AM       View Profile for icebox   Email icebox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icebox



This is not poetry, it is prose and I had to post it in the Mature forum because the censors would not allow it in Prose, also, it is about a time before Coke came in cans:
http://piptalk.com/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayprivate&number=61&topic=001353

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2 posted 02-13-2010 05:56 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Juju...

You'll enjoy Ice's story.

I don't drink Coke....

is there a story in that?
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3 posted 02-13-2010 06:51 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

I did enjoy his story. Very beautiful.

Yes.  You just have to have the poem talk about memories and reflections that a can of coke gives you.

I am just trying to think outside the box,

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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4 posted 02-23-2010 09:43 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Okay so I was inspired by the classic glass Coke bottle. And the shape reminded me of a girl I know. Its not my best. But I enjoyed the challenge. Thanks.


"Oh how your decedent and lovely with your curves.
Upon your sealed lips, goodness for others to enjoy.
Your amber color; bubbled feelings silent/ reserved.  
Causing envy inspired girls. Wringing lovestruck boys. "
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Nice

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

 
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