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On a Can of Coke

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Juju
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0 posted 01-25-2010 04:07 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

On a Can of Coke

Just 140 calories per can
If everything was 140
Without being fatty,and too hard on my teeth.
I am sure that I would take a bite out of it.

Juju




-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos
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JamesMichael
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1 posted 01-25-2010 04:51 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
viking_metal
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2 posted 01-26-2010 08:14 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Ha. Truth.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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3 posted 01-26-2010 01:08 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Isn't that the truth!  I cut out all white, sugar, fructose...you know all they say is bad for you, and replaced it all with healthy stuff.  However, offer me a chocolate, or ice cream, and I am like a herd of elephants to get that thing!
Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 05-15-2010 08:24 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

This is one gem of a poem.  It should of had a bigger audience.
2islander2
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by the sea


5 posted 05-15-2010 11:30 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

so original and thoughtful.

Have a nice day

yann
Andrew Scott
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6 posted 05-15-2010 03:28 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Would that everything came with a label you could trust. I like the thought behind this one.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 05-15-2010 04:42 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear Juju,

Donít do it.  The aluminum will cause indigestion.

Love Bobby
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


8 posted 05-18-2010 10:28 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Juju - this one deserves another go. I would also, if only 140...

BC
Toerag
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Ala bam a


9 posted 05-19-2010 09:17 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Try a can of Toerag! No calories, very sweet, not an ounce of fat. Very satisfying and refreshing. So easy on your teeth.

Very interesting write young lady.
passing shadows
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10 posted 05-19-2010 09:28 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Well, since WalMart has the cases on sale now for $5 I tend to drink a case a week! That's a pound of calories just in drinks!

Gotta stop this soon

good write!
 
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