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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2010-01-25 04:07 PM


On a Can of Coke

Just 140 calories per can
If everything was 140
Without being fatty,and too hard on my teeth.
I am sure that I would take a bite out of it.

Juju




-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-01-25 04:51 PM


Enjoyed...James
viking_metal
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2 posted 2010-01-26 08:14 AM


Ha. Truth.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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3 posted 2010-01-26 01:08 PM


Isn't that the truth!  I cut out all white, sugar, fructose...you know all they say is bad for you, and replaced it all with healthy stuff.  However, offer me a chocolate, or ice cream, and I am like a herd of elephants to get that thing!
Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan
4 posted 2010-05-15 08:24 AM


This is one gem of a poem.  It should of had a bigger audience.
2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2010-05-15 11:30 AM


so original and thoughtful.

Have a nice day

yann

Andrew Scott
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6 posted 2010-05-15 03:28 PM


Would that everything came with a label you could trust. I like the thought behind this one.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2010-05-15 04:42 PM


Yo dear Juju,

Don’t do it.  The aluminum will cause indigestion.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2010-05-18 10:28 PM


Juju - this one deserves another go. I would also, if only 140...

BC

Toerag
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Ala bam a
9 posted 2010-05-19 09:17 AM


Try a can of Toerag! No calories, very sweet, not an ounce of fat. Very satisfying and refreshing. So easy on your teeth.

Very interesting write young lady.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2010-05-19 09:28 AM


Well, since WalMart has the cases on sale now for $5 I tend to drink a case a week! That's a pound of calories just in drinks!

Gotta stop this soon

good write!

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