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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-04 05:56 AM


Be Careful

At some point you
have to realize
you don't have
any control over that.

Perhaps then you
can let go.
If not.
Be careful.

For that over
which you have
no control
will try
it's hardest
to take you
to a place
where you won't
want to go.

JamesLee
June03
2002


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Elan
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1 posted 2002-06-04 09:13 AM



Yes, James, be careful...

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-06-04 09:14 AM


Very very true James.
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-06-04 10:19 AM




BRAVO!!! Oh James, such wisdom and truth flows from your pen, sweet friend, yes, it helps always to be aware and to be cautious before taking a step on that kind of foreign ground to our intentions! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Saunni
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4 posted 2002-06-04 11:49 AM


James, you got that right in this piece of work, we surely have to be careful! I love this

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-06-07 04:40 AM


wisdom of the ages here!
ethome
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6 posted 2002-06-07 04:44 AM


Hi James.

This is true!
Like the old cliche'  "Be careful what you wish for you just might get it" or something like that!
Thanks

bags123
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since 2002-06-06
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7 posted 2002-06-07 08:26 AM


Hi James,
I'm a control freak myself and often find myself wandering aimlessly with great anxiety.I appreciate the thoughts expressed so admirably in your poem. Thank you.

vandana
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8 posted 2002-06-07 10:48 AM


liked it
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