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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Thanks Maureen for an Idea Rhyme that pictures as a still words that flow from garden tills wickerwork craft of native mirth ship's aft towards a harbour berth. Rhymes still flow refracted emerald glow words run still patient pops pill. Rhymed produce stock shelves of minds trained listeners would do well to unwind, appreciate delights in worded chains rhymed pictures encased in golden frames. sillyness allowed to peak odd sounds groomed to speak conveyor belts of words soon bind abundance of rhythmic poems you'll find. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
hi ecrivan I had to read this a few times to get into the meaning of it. Perhaps I should have read Maureen's first. There are some excellent rhyming stills in this and I really like the way you end it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Martin, sorry it took me so long to get back to this..but I am between coughs lately *s..I enjoyed your play on words and the variety of rhyming stills you used *s great images, thanks M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martin~ Just to let you know this was thoroughly enjoyed this evening. I don't get the time to respond to every post.. but do know, I read, read, read!  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Wow, no way, I too have occasionally thought of rhyming being compared to expanding an aseembly line, it's as though every time we expand our vocabulary we seem to make a new mass production of inspiration come alive and make a corporation of wonder out of it all! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I just love the way you think, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Nancy does sound like a Shakespearean incantation in some places..I like it too |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Maureen, Take care of your cough..I usually take some expectorant to get the mucous out of the bronchules if that's the cause..eucalyptus is a natural remedy |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Ethome, thanks for sharing Noah, so I think when I have to produce sometimes! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
appreciate delights in worded chains rhymed pictures encased in golden frames. I really love the way you phrased this, Martin... beautiful writing.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Lyra, your critiques are always appreciated |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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